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Writer's Word Choice

'Why did the writer choose crept?' is where comprehension turns into analysis. The three-link chain — word, suggestion, reader's feeling — structures a full-mark answer every time.

E4Writer's Word Choice
Why did the writer choose THAT word?
Writer's-choice questions ask about effect: what a word makes the reader feel or picture.
Why ‘crept’ rather than ‘went’?
Fog crept through the streets, pressing against the windows.
‘Crept’ makes the fog feel slow, sneaky and alive — like an intruder.
Formula: The word ___ suggests ___ , making the reader feel ___.
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Learn the 3-Step Method

1Zoom in on the chosen word.

‘Crept’ — what kind of movement is creeping? Slow, quiet, secretive.

zoom in

2Compare with a plain swap.

‘Fog went through the streets’ loses the menace — the choice DID something.

vs plain word

3Name the effect on the reader.

It makes the fog feel alive and threatening; the reader feels uneasy.

reader feels…
💡 Key IdeaFull-mark answers connect three links: word → suggestion → reader's feeling. Stop early and the marks stop too.
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Worked Example

‘The waves smashed against the tiny boat.’ Why did the writer choose ‘smashed’?

Word
‘smashed’ = violent, destructive impact
Suggests
the sea is powerful and dangerous, the boat fragile (‘tiny’ helps)
✓ Effect
the reader fears for the boat — tension rises
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Watch Out! Common Mistakes

Defining instead of analysing.

Not a dictionary! ‘Smashed means hit hard’ only defines. Say what it suggests and how the reader feels.

‘It makes it interesting.’

Too vague! Every word ‘makes it interesting’. Name the specific feeling: menace, speed, fragility, unease.

Ignoring nearby team-mates.

Words hunt in packs! ‘Smashed’ works with ‘tiny’ — power against fragility. Spot the pairing for the best answers.

📄 Free printable: Download the Writer's Word Choice cheat sheet (PDF) — keep it by your child's desk.

Quick summary

Frequently asked questions

How do you answer 'why did the writer use this word?'

With the three-link chain: state what the word suggests and what it makes the reader feel — 'crept suggests slow, sneaky movement, making the fog feel like an intruder.'

What loses marks on effect questions?

Defining the word instead of analysing it, and vague effects like 'it's more interesting'. Specific feelings — menace, tension, pity — score.

Where does this skill appear?

KS2 SATs content-domain 2G, 11+ comprehension, and it's the foundation of GCSE English analysis later.

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